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Alexi MartinAnnotation of
More statistics could have been added to enhance the film's educational value and/or a plan of what the company or Japan would do about the future of nuclear power.
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Zackery.WhiteAnnotation of
A child's perspective would increase the emotional aspect of the film.
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wolmadAnnotation of
More scientific data and perspectives from public health officials could be used to broaden the perspective of this film and change its purpose from being an emotional film to being a more educational film.
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erin_tuttleAnnotation of
The interviews in the film suggested the government was acting improperly during the initial outbreak, interviews with officials in the government would greatly increase the educational value of the film as it would provide differing opinions and a more complete understanding of the situation.
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tamar.rogoszinskiAnnotation of
More scientific data and interviews with government workers and health officials would have strengthened the argument of this film and turned it into more of an educational film, rather than a solely emotional one. Even providing the viewer with some information about ebola could have been helpful.
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Sara_NesheiwatAnnotation of
I think that adding more evidentiary support such as data analysis r statistics would have enhanced this video's educational value. It would have shown the physical evidence and the magnitude of the disaster. I also believe that citing more government officials and getting statements from more hospital workers, doctors and first responders would have given this film a more well rounded and accurate depiction of all sides of the outbreak.
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seanw146Annotation of
More focus on the care, treatment, containment, and management of contagious diseases like Ebola would have increased its educational value, especially to first responders.
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Andreas_RebmannAnnotation of
They could have discussed logistics on transport and mass treatments more, but overall they did a good job.
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ciera.williamsAnnotation of
The film provided general facts about MSF and the conditions in Lieria and the Congo, but no detailed medical statisitics. There wasn't any comparison of the issues in this mission versus those on other missions. The film could have included more on the factors that contribute to the diseases themselves, rather than the barriers to treating them. The film also needed more on the exact amounts of supplies that were given relative to what one would have in a clinic elsewhere.
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xiaoxAnnotation of
It might be can descript the feelings of doctors and people when they faced leaving or project ending. The improvement of the area that MSF helped.